I suppose you could say that I felt that the original piece was to… heavy…. wordy… something along those lines, with that as an after thought, I cut some of the gristle away from the meat and left the bone. This is one of 44 out of 189 pieces that I actually am proud that I wrote.
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work in progress: (a) woman
Before the pen clots and the ink stops flowing: In a moment I know by way of familiarity; all day long I’m thinking the same old thoughts and inside my head they go round in circles concentrically. And then the pen slows and the ink stops flowing. And did she ever really exist to begin [...]
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Juliet